Things I Like

• Kaliba
• I guess getting cursed because of a leg cramp is kinda funny?

Things That Could Be Improved

• Hero set-up doesn’t feel that necessary to the main plot
• I don’t really sympathise with Beyond
• Cast feels small. Would be more interesting if more of the party members appeared
• No hints to if the blob curse can be lifted (is this what the story is about or is it about accepting and understanding what’s required to live with the blobs?